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Wednesday, 24 May 2017

The day I became a spy.

By Kirsten
The Day I became a Spy.
By Kirsten
24th May, 2017
It was fine ordinary day or so i thought it was. Yes my name is name is  Kirsten just ordinary kirsten or I might not be.  So I was saying I sat on a bench I picked up a newspaper and read the subheading YOU SAMANTHA KIRSTEN HAS BEEN CHOSEN TO BE A SPY! I was surprised but my heart was smiling. I continued to read and it said … you Kirsten are assigned to a mission with Kate and Kaia You are to bring your Twin Sister and your Friend and meet here then there was a picture of a giant dome  So I raced home leaving the Newspaper behind but I came back for it. I showed Kate and Kaia and they looked surprised but happy. We got to go shouted Kaia
The Girls ran as fast as lightning when they got there this lady came up to them and said Hello agent Kirsten, Kate and Kaia I see you have read the newspaper Yes Sir Mam Sir Shouted Kate the lady continued speaking Kaia and I’s mouths were just hanging wide open and we nodded.
She, the lady reviewed the mission with them they had to retrieve the stolen gems all over the world and oh yeah this is your sidekick slash helper on missions and his name is charlie.
The Lady left us then Kate said “are we gonna do it?” asked Kate, We got to yelled Kaia this is a once in a lifetime opportunity. Ok we're going to do it. Then there was a silence then someone broke the silence and that person was Charlie the dog the dog could talk then he said in the most adorable voice “ Greetings and Salutations my name is Charlie I will be disguised as your dog that everybody wants but in reality I’m here to assist you on missions”.
Ok the dog can talk Kate said ever so slowly . After 5 hours or more their mission began. They had to go to a very very rich person’s mansion. They entered my tummy was popping was if there was popping candy in my tummy.
As we entered the first thing we saw was the diamond. It was as clear as crystal when we were about to take our first step then there was lazers so we all cartwheeled there as quiet as a spider we got the diamond but then Kate tripped then an artifact fell and then BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!  The alarm went of.
The next thing that happened was a giant guy with a face as red as a tomato was about to kill us Yep I think that’s the big fat guy that’s really rich said Kate between laughs but with a heart of a lion we retrieved the diamond and headed back to headquarters and that was just the beginning.
In Room 8 for writing we get to write anything. So I wrote a narrative about how it would be to become a spy.Just to let you know I'm not actually a spy but I would love to be. And my Goal is LF for this writing piece. Te be continued. 


4 comments:

  1. Hi it's me Ridhi and I love you're work it is amazing,
    I have no word for it but I love it. It hooks the reader in makes they wan't to keep on reading it but wow no words and thankyou for the comment on my blog and I have replyed to it. Even tho you know my blog just in case if you forget just click my name on top of the comment.
    Bye

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  2. Thank you and you spelled though wrong you spelled it like this "tho" and you need a space in the "thank you" anyway thanks for the comment.

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  3. Hi Kristen
    it's me Brianna I really like your story that you did it is a really good one and it is so long I wouldn't be ably to write that much writing it's so much my favourite part is the 1st paragraph
    -Brianna

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    1. Salutations Brianna,
      I'm really glad you liked my writing. My favourite part is paragraph 1 too. I will comment on your blog soon.
      Kirsten

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